It is generally believed by some people that lessons must be taught to children about managing money in the school. This essay agrees with the statement because this idea will make them independent by knowing the value of money and reduce bad habits from them.
On one hand, money makes children not to be dependent on parents, if they would know how to manage it properly. schools must involve children with projects. For example, projects on buying or selling goods and teach them about the importance which will help them in the future. Extra effort must be given to look after children by parents.
On the other hand, teachers and parents must make children aware of the bad habits prevailing from the pocket money they recieve like going to theatre or taking drugs. For instance, in a research it is found that about 20 percent of children found with drugs prevailing from money taken from parents. It is also found that there is an increase in crime rate by juvenile and reasons include mostly money issues.
To conclude, schools must involve inculcating children with the value of money to reduce availing crimes and bad habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26453084197 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4040695267 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249695226577 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116031043578 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114793184325 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160186552669 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758318207805 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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