Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The school is considered as an important pioneer of a child's life. The lessons that are learnt in the early years of life stays for lifelong, from the theoritical knowledge to the practical learning experiences. Some individuals believes, that the concepts which are taught in the school life, can be a good start for the children to grow their knowledge about the outside practical world. One such lesson is the money management, many people feels the schools should be responsible in imparting this understanding in the children.
There is no doubt that managing money is a crucial factor in a person's life. If an adult does not know ways of saving the money or is ignorant to understand the need of saving the money, he will be broke at an early age. As learning about Maths, Science, Geography is essential, similarly knowing how to organize the finances is also significant.
In the current age, the children are overly pampered, protected and are not aware about the burdens that the parents have to face to provide them a good quality of life. Most of the kids take their families for granted, and are never satisfied with the valuables they have in their life. To make these youngsters understand the value of money, cash management is necessary in the school years.
Additionally, the schools could also try and give some practical scenarios for the children to engage in the learning about the money matters. Kidzania is a perfect example of such an encounter, where the young kids are given an opportunity to earn the money and later use their own money for leisure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'believe'.
Suggestion: believe
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...managing money is a crucial factor in a persons life. If an adult does not know ways of...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85608856089 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63904979407 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8814157238 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230032574355 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854214560192 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667091595912 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133970400771 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501494252577 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.