Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Although some argue that to be good in academics, children should get homework daily, while others think that it will be good for children not to get academic tasks for home. In my opinion, I believe that teachers should not give assignments to pupils for home because it will increase the severe pressure to perform best.
On the one hand, in this soaring competition era, people want their child to acquire a lot of knowledge so that they will get success in future. For example, if children do study at school as well as home, they would have a high chance to perform marvellously in the academic front. As a result, their cognitive skills will be sharper, and they would do better afterwards in life.
On the other hand, my point of view is that study-related work must be limited to the schools only. Even everyone wants to be successful in life, but not on the terms of loss of innocence and a higher level of pressure. Therefore, the study must be fun for them instead of the source of turmoil. Enjoying while learning should be the motto of schools. For instance, a cinema superstar, named, Ranbir Kapoor secured 48% in 12th standard as he had taken study as a source of enjoyment. Even he is one of the intelligent celebrities of Bollywood. Resultantly, pressure always decreases the ability of a person.
In conclusion, despite to be successful in particular field or class needs good academic record which comes through regular practice, it is my firm belief that studying with fun and without severe pressure makes us a right person in personal as well as professional life.
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- Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...knowledge so that they will get success in future. For example, if children do study at s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78339350181 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65463024483 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.577851271 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277174443608 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882586464049 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708909783645 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151089888063 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079117398302 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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