In the contemporary era, pocket money plays a pivotal role in children life. Some people believe that allowance should be given to kids to make them aware about the significance of money in life, whilst, other oppose to this idea. However, in my opinion, there are multifarious factors to prove the benefits of petty money given to kids.
To commence with, the primary factor is to inculcate the sense of value for money in young generation. This is because the dealing for their expenditure is done by them to fulfill the requirements. For example, school projects, excursions expenses are arranged only by them, in such a way, so that they do not face any shortages in their future needs. By doing so, they could grapple the worth for hard earned money by their parents and donot indulge into unnecessary desires, which can be roughly made by kids in other case.
Scrutinizing further, skills of managing financial aspects can be grasped in the tender age, without any helping hand, give them the cognitive ability to be self-reliant in future life. There are plethora of circumstances which are tackled by youngsters due to the limited resources of money in their hand, make them capable to curtail the problems with full efficacy. For instance, when children are provided with weekly or monthly pocket financial limits, then they automatically able to alleviate their needs accordingly to buy those products. In addition to this, it is helpful in the development of child personality in paramount way.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down saying that extra money plays crucial role in children mental ability to give sense of value and management skills. Hence, they progress in prestine manner in adulthood and it remains with them throughout long life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03754266212 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65733358816 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3121715021 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121288066299 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412977218085 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309057681534 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722741678527 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187513182207 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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