Some people believe that economic growth of any country reduces poverty and hunger while other think that it causes damage to the environment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Many countries are now in the middle of a period of high economic growth. Some people feel this is a positive development that has allowed people to maintain a better standard of living free from poverty and hunger due to the increased job opportunities. Some others feel that unchecked economic development will have negative impacts on our surroundings due to the pollution that inevitably accompanies it. It is my opinion that the positive effects of a growing economy outweighs the negatives.
Environmentalists around the world are protesting the effect of industries on the deterioration of the environment. The industrial wastes have polluted the air and water and the level of pollution will only increase as a result of the growth and expansion of various industries. Cities like Beijing and Delhi have topped the charts of the most polluted cities in the world. Thus, growth of an economy usually comes at the expense of a clean, safe and green environment and countries should make sure there are appropriate regulations to curb the potential devastating effects on our environment.
A healthy economy is one of the key indicators of a country’s growth . In such countries, job aspirants will usually have no problem landing a job of their choice and are usually spoilt for choice with very high remuneration. To illustrate, India decided to open up its economy for more business in the early 90s and since then we have seen a dramatic increase in the living conditions of its citizens with most people leaping over the poverty line. Therefore, a growing economy is essential to ensure people have an opportunity to lead a better life free from hunger and poverty.
Economies around the world will continue to grow at a rapid pace. This essay discussed how this growth could affect the environment if not controlled but how it also elevates the living conditions of its citizens. In my opinion, the benefits of improved living standard for people far outweighs the effects on the environment which can be controlled by regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06213017751 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94482757855 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9069865493 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162976141188 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554744971111 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438032791181 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102430651116 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533423971259 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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