To retire or to not retire at sixty years? This is a sensitive topic that has both social and economic impact. In this essay, we will discuss the positive and negative aspects of retiring at sixty years.
Considering that the average life expectancy of individuals if at least eighty years in a country like India, there are some advantages to not retire at sixty. Firstly, if you continue to work even after sixty years, then there is less burden on the social welfare schemes that the government supports. This in turn, ensures that pensioners are not a burden on young population of tax payers. Secondly, after investing about thirty years of your life in acquiring the skills and degrees to pursue a career as a doctor or a scientist, it would be a colossal waste all the experience that they acquired, we the society cannot utilize it to the optimal level.
However, there are certain advantages to retire at sixty years. There is more to life than work, leading a healthy life is also crucial. For example, the stress at work can impact your physical and mental well being. The risks of diseases such as heart attack, and diabetes are quite high over fifty years and if one continues to work, it might be detrimental to their health. Additionally, in the ever changing world it is always difficult to keep pace with technological advancement at work and compete with young professional who have the zeal and energy to perform better.
In conclusion, although there are advantages to not retire at sixty, such as achieving professional goals and being economically independent, I think it is better to retire when you are at sixty and enjoy a peaceful and relaxed retired life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84137931034 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64548164371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.975083401 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948310661055 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370917556332 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260271849416 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633888095379 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00798533160608 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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