Nowadays, some people believe that entertainers have mouth-watery paychecks and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive impact on others.
On one hand, people see entertainers as very negative to the society because of the kind of visual contents created by them and released to the public for consumption. These videos contain indecent dressings which has a tremendous effect on the youths of today. Music videos belonging to musicians now have a lot of nudity, yet contents like this would still make a lot of income. Upon all the negativity been displayed by entertainers, a lot of profit is made once any project of theirs drops or is released. At times, celebrities get endorsements for certain products after making songs with a lot of curse words. We all wonder why this happens, right?
On the other hand, some people think that the entertainers deserve the amounts been rolled in and nobody should try to judge them. Entertainment has brought more good than harm to our society. There are great movies that have contributed to the economies of countries, so the actors in these movies deserve whatever that is gotten from it. In addition, entertainers have positively impacted the society by raising young entertainers for the future generation. Movies, music videos and other entertainment programs are fun to watch when the whole members of a family are home on vacations. However, the royalties made by entertainers keep coming until God knows when it will stop!
To conclude, my opinion about the money entertainers earn or the effects they have on people is simple. Due to the fact that these entertainers work hard to get contents for the public, the earnings they’ll get from it is well deserved. It is left for parents to guide their kids from the negative effects they feel might result from entertainment. The entertainers deserve our appreciation for the wonderful works been put out every day.
- Your friend is visiting your town Write a letter to give him her some suggestions on places to visit and where to find cheap accommodations In your letter you should When the best time to visit your town is Where the interesting places to visit are Where 73
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 73
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- Water is a natural resource that should always be free Governments should ban the sale of bottled water To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, well, while, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0447761194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76921947855 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5328764827 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358221355735 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10100966935 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135579510163 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257717596389 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195837485218 0.056905535591 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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