Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be
created by people with special talents. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In the world wherever one looks around they find themselves surrounded by the art and the artists. While some people believe that any individual can create art, I, however, side with those who believe that one must be estowned with special talents to be an artist.
on one hand, some people argue that anyone would be able to create art through persistent practice and dedication. Though practice makes a man perfect not everyone can master the skill of perfection. It often requires a great deal of dedication to master any art. Despite the fact that many people start the journey to learn art but not everyone eventually finishes it to the end. It is often observed that many people give up in the middle because of the enormous amount of hard work required to learn the skill. Moreover, it is also argued that there are specialised training institutions to learn any kind of art. Although I concede, anyone can enroll themselves in the training centers and learn the art they want to, but I still feel, learning any form of art requires self-discipline, inner zeal, and enthusiasm. Everyone has their field of interest and not every individual can be creatively minded being an artist. For example, parents can force their children to learn painting, dancing or singing but until the children want from their own will they can never master in any of the art forms.
On the other hand, I hold the opinion that being an artist requires special talents because of creativity. An artist ought to be creative to extract art out of everything he sees or hears, for instance, it is the photographer creatively angled photos that convert an ordinary pic into an art. Similarly, it is the painter's creative knowledge of mixing colours that converts any background into a scenic art piece. Besides, I also believe that these special talents of artists are sometimes bestowed to them through genes. For example, the children from a family of the singer will have good vocals.
In conclusion, even though training institutions and practice can help people to learn the basics of any art, I still believe artists are born with special talents that may be hereditary or their creative thinking capability. Therefore, on balance, I strongly believe that art can only be created by people with special talents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ith special talents to be an artist. on one hand, some people argue that anyone...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ugh persistent practice and dedication. Though practice makes a man perfect not everyo...
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Line 3, column 979, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to paint'.
Suggestion: to paint
...rents can force their children to learn painting, dancing or singing but until the child...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8093220339 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51842891501 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0796727193 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295353383813 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110139817085 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066719976755 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248276214124 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010080351446 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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