Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference.
Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?
With the increment in modernization of the socitey and high professional aspirations of both husband and wife, has a direct influence on the late start of the family. This cause the huge age gap between the parents and the children. In my opinion that advantages do not outweighs the disadvantages. This essay will emphasize on the disadvantages of the greater age difference by exploring below mentioned viewpoints:
Parent who have greater age difference have much more to offer to their kids in terms of facility, advice or comfort than parents with less age difference. However, without a doubt, there is an inevitable decline in the efficiency, energy and life span with increasing age. This has a direct effect on the quality and time aged parent have with their kids. As an Instance, growing old calls a lot of age-related health issues like arthritis, cataract etc, some of which are chronic. These chronic health issues might not allow the parents to spend as much time in outdoor activities as they would at a younger age. Thus, big age gap has consequential effect on meeting the kid’s extracurricular requirements, which is vital for kids while growing up.
Age gap may hinder the amount of time parents will spend with the kids. For example, children need the care, advice and emotional support till they don’t stand up on their own feet (which mostly is after age of 21 or sometimes 25). Parents with greater age difference with their kids might not be able to look after their kids or be available by their adolescence. And thus, age gap directly influences the amount of time parents would spends with their kids.
In conclusion, the higher age difference between parents and their children has a negative impact on the time and care a child would need from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9504950495 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73312762282 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6121749803 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326844199633 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117810462894 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947663260373 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217654821871 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458941988011 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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