Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Everyone has some or other hobbies and likes to enjoy in his manner but the fact is that only few people are able to chase their hobbies and for other it just remains the dream. I believe that hobbies which are in line with environment where person live can be enjoyed.
People who believe that hobbies are difficult to fulfill has some valid points. Firstly, in fast pace of life, people are struggling to complete the main commitment of life such as job, study, business etc. and hardly get time to think about their favorite activities. For some people, this has become illusion to think about these being fulfilled. For example, my father who is very good swimmer and won the awards at university level but do not have spare time to go for swimming. Secondly, this is also fact that hobbies could be anything varies from skiing to racing, swimming to reading and so on and it might also happen that person may have liking which may not supported by the environment where person lives. For instance, person living in Middle East likes the ice hockey which is not possible at his place and may be insatiable in life.
However, general observation is that hobbies supported by local facilities and environment can be enjoyed up-to some extents. It is seen that people are able to do what they like in the atmosphere where things are easily accessible and gives the feeling of satisfaction. Reading for example is easily to meet as it does not require expensive infrastructure and books can be purchased from vicinity at most of the places. Additionally, activities which are dependent on other are also difficult to achieve.
To sum up, it is dream for person to do what he likes but the truth is that people are involved in so many things and not able to do what they like. One important factor in fulfilling hobbies is to prioritize your liking based on your environment and infrastructure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71987951807 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5508527374 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521084337349 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7090414575 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260249019074 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925319560533 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660879810571 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170867001075 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275258904485 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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