Anything which is simplified be it studies, sport or music makes is more fun for any individual. If we look at internet we would find a heap of , do it yourself projects which makes things like knitting, making or decorating shoes, cooking, making pottery, building your own fireplace, or how to plant vegetables, gardening using things which are accessible at home. Though, internet is not the only mode of people enjoying their hobbies.There are lots of other sources such as community services funded by government helps one to enjoy and learn at the same time. Then there are people who gives different coaching and classes to attract students or people at large by advertising simple and easy. However, there are those who likes to enjoy hobbies which are challenging and which makes them compete to themselves. For e.g- mountain climbing, river-rafting, deep sea diving, jungle safari's, and experimenting with chemicals at home under no supervision.
Hence, I personally believe any hobby be it easy or difficult it develops ones personality and bring confidence in ones skills.
As some people end up making their hobby there career.
I agree that hobbies should be easy not difficult. Which would be extended further in the paragraphs.
For example- when i was in my teens i use to enjoy spending time with my mother in her kitchen, I was fond of cooking learning about spices how it enhances the flavor and changes the taste of any dish. But unfortunately she use to make it a herculean task for me to follow the recipe and understand the essence of spices. Thus growing up i gave up my hobby.
I wish she would have made if easier and understandable for me to pursue my hobby. Nevertheless, I agree that hobbies should be hassle free and not difficult.
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:>how you felt about the trip and>how did you take care of his house in his absence. 67
- If you are given a chance to change what change would you implement in 21 century to make your world a better place to live Discuss a few changes 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...look at internet we would find a heap of , do it yourself projects which makes thi...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng things which are accessible at home. Though, internet is not the only mode of peopl...
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Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...y mode of people enjoying their hobbies.There are lots of other sources such as commu...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...bby be it easy or difficult it develops ones personality and bring confidence in one...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nes personality and bring confidence in ones skills. As some people end up making t...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty and bring confidence in ones skills. As some people end up making their hobby t...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t hobbies should be easy not difficult. Which would be extended further in the paragr...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r in the paragraphs. For example- when i was in my teens i use to enjoy spending...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s. For example- when i was in my teens i use to enjoy spending time with my moth...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... For example- when i was in my teens i use to enjoy spending time with my mother i...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...aste of any dish. But unfortunately she use to make it a herculean task for me to f...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...aste of any dish. But unfortunately she use to make it a herculean task for me to f...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the essence of spices. Thus growing up i gave up my hobby. I wish she would ha...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hassled'?
Suggestion: hassled
...theless, I agree that hobbies should be hassle free and not difficult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87707641196 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79684328375 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4835411741 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190393425904 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843532552614 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104523723347 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140747889414 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918055494738 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.