Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after 60, it causes problems for younger people. Do you agree or disagree? opinion.
One section of society believes that it would be an issue for the young generation if elderly people do not get retired at the age of 60, while others disagree. I believe that older employees work because not only it will decrease
the burden on state tax but also it will help young people to learn skills from older workers.
The working old professionals will not be a burden on society anymore. Improved sanitation and antibiotics have
vanquished most infectious diseases because of which life expectancy has increased. If older people get retirement at age of 60, they will become dependent on tax. As a result of which young professionals would have to pay hefty taxes to support public medical expenses. For instance, the medical services in Britain are suffering since the average age of Britain is 50 and most people get retired at the age of 55, increasing
the burden on the taxation system.
The elder workers can teach some vital skills to fresh graduated while working with them. The skills like
problem-solving and decision making cannot be taught in the classroom although they can be learned by new joiners while
working with more experienced peers. For example, when I joined firm as a fresher their was one worker aged 70,
who helped me to learn a new skill because of which I got early promotion. However, if the average age of the country is less then thirty, like India, it becomes difficult for young people to get the job as more jobs are
filled with people, who are supposed to be retired.
In conclusion, working the old generation will decrease the burden on the taxation system as well as young people
will acquire new skills from them.
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...xation system as well as young people will acquire new skills from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89965397924 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53900499754 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1863425767 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176591335763 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679359307524 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473539364993 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621884654359 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505741772549 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.