Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger people. To what extent do you agree?
Elder people has immense practical knowledge as compare to youngsters. It is often argued that people should work after 60, other believes that they should retire from work at the age of 60. I agrees with later, and explain my views in later paragraphs.
Firstly, workplace nowadays has a very fast paced environment. With the advancement in technology, new systems are getting implemented in companies. I think as person gets older, it is very hard for him to keep up with the expectation of a fast working environment. They lack work speed as compare to other young employees. Moreover, they need more time to learn technology as compare to young generation, which is very tech savvy. For example, according to survey, company with more number of elderly employees spend more money on training as compare to one's that have majority of young employees. Therefore, I think elderly employee are lacking few skills i.e. technical knowledge and working culture, which is demand of most of the jobs today.
Secondly, we cannot deny that cognitive skills, stress bearing power and patience decreases with age. We have often seen that body's capability to take work load and take work place stress declines with age. Moreover, there will less job vacancy available, if people keeps working after the age of 60, instead of taking retirements. Hence, this will increase unemployment among young generation. For instance, North American countries has less unemployment rates as compare to Asian countries, and the reason is better retirement plan is in place in former countries, that vacant seats for youngsters.
To conclude, Government should promote a retirement at the age of 60, these will help company's to grow and increase the employment rate among young people as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17301038062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69207265528 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4646912152 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19714642676 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626078399214 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723128588028 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138288239951 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746248956366 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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