Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60 then its problem. Do u agree or disagree.
many people advocate that retirement age should be fixed at sixty or it would create problems otherwise. In my opinion, I partially agree to this notion as allowing retirement to its highest experienced employees are detrimental for companies, therefore, a provision should be there to let the employee decide whether they want to continue after the retirement age and for how long.
To start with, the most experienced employees are those who reached the phase of retirement and company can highly benefit from their proficiency. In bank, for instance, the retired employees are called back for giving training sessions to fresher. they are greatly respected by one and all apart from earning handsomely.
Another crucial point to be considered is that most people do not lose their vitality immediately after retirement rather by sitting alone they develop a sense of losing purpose, daily routine and social connection. Gradually it leads to depression for few if they do not occupy themselves mentally, physically and socially. In other worlds, people develop a habit of following routine for their entire life until retirement, when they face a sudden emptiness and that might trigger the feeling unserviceable. if only they get an opportunity to rejoin the company, they will not sit alone at home.
Finally, the best solution would be to keep an option open where the employer and employee can discuss about further course of action which ought to be beneficial for both parties. Moreover, for those who have alternate plans to enjoy life after retirement will obviously not opt for extended working years, but this option will be rewarding for some who finds pleasure in working and also ensure that experience of employees is not getting wasted.
To recapitulate, not allowing people to work after sixty years of age is unpractical whereas making it optional for the employees to decide for further continuation of work is better approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20569620253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74288602209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.294115291 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17098702135 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627862977069 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681236789826 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106968710524 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776725077436 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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