Many people find themselves in a situation where they must either accept what life has given to them or find a way to move up in the world. In my opinion, although accepting your situation in life may be pragmatic in some cases, it is still better to at least strive to improve your situation as it can be usually bettered to some degree.
To begin with, the vast majority of people are unable to change their life circumstances. As a result, they find comfort by accepting fate so they may feel more satisfied with their lives. One clear example are the people that live in dire economic condition. Recent researches, put Africa among poorest countries in the world. One reason for this, is the lack of infrastructure development and corruption. For a person living in a small village, ravaged by conflicts and famine it would be cruel to suggest that they should find a way to improve their living because it might simply be impossible. For that reason, those people understand the situation that they are in and focus more on their own survival and that of their family.
On the other hand, few people can change their difficult situations for the better through continued effort. Besides that, what have distinguished this people in difference to other, is their mindset of not giving up. There is a tendency to believe that, by reading self development books, people can open their mind to be more determined. As a result, they can archive their objectives and being fearless in front of different obstacles during the way.
To encapsulate, there are very few situations where it would be advisable to simply accept an unhappy situation because hard work over long period of time will prevail in the vast majority of cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'among the poorest'.
Suggestion: among the poorest
...ondition. Recent researches, put Africa among poorest countries in the world. One reason for ...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... Besides that, what have distinguished this people in difference to other, is their...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y situation because hard work over long period of time will prevail in the vast majority of ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, still, at least, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8127090301 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60340343043 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5470657884 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122034728369 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436138924326 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041931234707 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791353523772 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042268594401 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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