Everyone wants to have a beautiful life with all the good that it has to offer, therefore many people believe that money is considered to be essential in order to obtain all the joy in life. I completely agree with this idea and in the essay i will support my idea with examples.
Firstly, money can pay mammoth medical bills, there are many beliefs that money is not the most important thing until bad news are received by doctors. Consequently, for people it is compulsory to sell their home or request salty loans from banks. There is no need for people to struggle with frequently emergency situations. Money is important because having money means that you will not be destitute. It means that people are not dependent on being employed, living paycheck by paycheck and having to put up with abuse with their bosses because they badly need their job.
Another reason why money is important is that it enables people to have more control over their lives. It means more freedom to carve out their own path and less constrains in their choices. For instance, people can afford buying their dream car, having the spacious and luxury home that they have always desired and provide their children with the best education. This is important because enables children the best start in life, in comparison for their coevals it is compulsory to work instead of studying because their parent are poor and need their support.
In conclusion, humans are hardwired to seek warmth, safety and comfort, and having money is a great way to get those.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81954887218 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35438014879 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0454310911 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171499619781 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706321369563 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434822456482 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110594829244 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680981440618 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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