It is believed by some that offsprings should be grown up in the villages while others think that mega cities are better for the growth of children due to enormous benefits of urban areas. This essay will dicuss diverse advantages of living in rural areas and also focuses on the pivotal role of cities in children's lives.
On the one hand, it is considered that environment of villages is a boon for health because atmosphere are more tranquil and less crowded. If parents want to prepare their children for real world life, they should be taken away from the hustle and bustle of the cities. Moreover, they should be provided more cozy, peaceful surroundings in order to achieve tremendous intellectual and physical maturity.
In contrast, cities have their own significance. It offer more career opportunities and give chances to open new doors of success. Furthermore, cities are the heart of medical facilities. In towns, technologies develop more connectivity options to explore academic and professional skills. Educational institutions in cities are eqquipped with modern teaching methods and have more qualified tutors that help students substantially to improve their knowledge about the subjects. What is more, easy availability of transportation services are another benefit of suburbs.
To sum up, it is clear that both rural and urban regions play huge role in lives of children. I believe that living in outskirts are beneficial for sound health whereas cities teach how to survive in this modern era.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
... cities have their own significance. It offer more career opportunities and give chan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in contrast, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26229508197 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8383744037 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643442622951 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6369203483 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194154806952 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060845527134 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737979617361 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118734542827 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802815773685 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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