Nowadays presenting gift to inner circle has become a well-known trend for up-to-date nation. In that case they consider gift as a token of affection. Others believe that there are numerous imperative way to show love for nearest one without presents. So, I will explain my views both sides of argument.
To begin with, there is no doubt that gift is the most uncomplicated way of sharing our feeling to others. Sometimes, it is tough for us to express our affection to our friends and family. A minor gift can make that effortless. For example, all the kids may love their parents unconditionally, but it hard to say that, that situation a card with some letter can work like a token of love. Moreover, by presenting a gift we can make our near and dear happy in especial occasion. Such as, in birthday, marriage day even religion occasion we gift our friends and family.
Nevertheless, in this judgmental world still several people understand the value of affection without expensive gifts. Firstly, we can make our near and dear happy with spending quality times with them or taking care of them when they are illness and under any problem. To highlight, "The daily star' international newspaper published that day by day relationship become week cause in the busy life people are not getting time for showing love and care for family and friends. Furthermore, only by cooking food for nearest one can show how much we care about them. For instance, homemaker always try to make foods at home because she really care about the health of family members.
In conclusion, thought gift is paying a practical roll in our life but in the some time we should take care our nearest person with love. So that they can enjoy a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cares'.
Suggestion: cares
...o make foods at home because she really care about the health of family members. ...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...a practical roll in our life but in the some time we should take care our nearest pe...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...take care our nearest person with love. So that they can enjoy a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77814569536 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59669583546 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2525779751 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8823529412 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26519238916 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800675165907 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473332253324 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15215879935 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060443803809 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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