Hardly can anyone deny the increasing popularity of life in mega cities in recent year. Although it is argued that it is harder and harder. I am of the opinion that it is easier.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of reason why it is often believed that life in large cities is difficulty, one of which is that there is traffic jam. To be more specific, each day at rush hour, a lot of vehicle circulate on road, accompanied by loud whistle. Therefore, people usually late and don’t have energy for work. For example, Sai Gon is known for traffic congestion that can delay people for up to 2 hours at times, making it extremely inconvenient to travel by car. Furthermore, big cities are the place too many criminals so there are always hard to control crime and social evils.
On the other hand, I am convinced that life in mega cities don’t difficultly as people think. The big cities – especial capitals – are the place located various companies from national to foreign ones. Therefor it is a variety of jobs and citizens can earn money to pay for their daily live. A clear example of this is that a lot of student in Ho Chi Minh city are able to make money without difficulties from different jobs such as tutor or waiter… In addition, the infrastructures has been built to serve life’s citizen, improved quality life. As a result, they can enjoy a full and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vehicle seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of vehicles'.
Suggestion: a lot of vehicles
...e more specific, each day at rush hour, a lot of vehicle circulate on road, accompanied by loud ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of students'.
Suggestion: a lot of students
...y live. A clear example of this is that a lot of student in Ho Chi Minh city are able to make mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56916996047 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57920206123 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6860971444 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145533639449 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523079174621 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474590775257 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900464536976 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00872162144155 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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