It is said that people hold conflicting views about the chances we are having in these days. Some inhabitants believe there are too many available chances in every subjects. I partly agree with this view and this essay will explain further for this viewpoint.
To commence with, the opinion of people having too many chances is quite reasonable. First, there are nothing that can be done in only one way nowadays. For instance, in the past, if people want to study in university, they will have to pass the entrance test with high scores but in these days, they just need to study in college in about 2 years before being qualified to go in university. Hence, more and more people are enable to have a better chance to study. Second, due to the rapid development of the society, there are many good opportunities for everyone. To be more specific, in some certain companies, workers do not have to work at the workplace, they can do tasks, have a meeting online or even earn salary at home.
On the flip of the coin, this opinion has some unreasonable points as well. Firstly, there are something that people should only do once in their life. To take an example, if a person makes a wrong decision of his studying path, of course that he can change later, but this will costs him an arm and a leg. As a result, he must do everything from the beginning. Secondly, there are many choices, but these choices just serve some basic purposes. We can choose the food we eat, the way we eat but just to meet our demand of thirst and hunger.
All in all, while there are still some benefits of this opinion I people with opposing views.
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- Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cost'
Suggestion: cost
...that he can change later, but this will costs him an arm and a leg. As a result, he m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49494949495 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34991267555 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0484114592 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306554068799 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949359402243 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533296173761 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180956690463 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567638378724 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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