Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement

There is no denying that, these day we have plenty of choices in everything from the smallest to biggest thing. For instance, we live in an age where we have numerous alternatives. However, I strongly agree with the above statement.

The following essay takes look at both sides of the argument, We all are aware that we are living in the 21st century where everything could be possible. Let us have a look on advantages of choices. We have seen the drastic changes took place in last two decade, for example, in the 90s in some houses only there used to be a telephone and television but now every individual has got their own cell phones plus several houses have TV not only in single room in a house even so in the other rooms as well. Furthermore, in this era we all have smartphones in which there is a various of applications from which we can purchase a cloths, shoes, electronic gadgets and many more. As well as at present we also could order grocery, mill, vegetables all the basic necessities for surviving. Besides, we too have options to cleaning our houses occasionally by paying money, additionally we possible book movie show or any entertaining shows, we perhaps recharge online for phones, gas, toll etc by getting some discount on it.

On the other hand, we have few of disadvantages even, like previously we used where normal fabrics apart from in the race of showing off to the world our expenses has gone high. Whereas, we were habituated to eat healthier food yet now taking junk food which leads to countless diseases in human body, prior families were comfortable in staying together nevertheless currently we have different of opinions with them then we just gets apart.

In the conclusion, I would say that at present we all have turned up with innumerable possibilities for plethora of things. Some how, It is worth it that we do not have to face unease for buying anything now it's only fingertip away. Folks can choose something according to their capability.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
There is no denying that, these day we have plenty of choices in everything...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the biggest'.
Suggestion: to the biggest
...choices in everything from the smallest to biggest thing. For instance, we live in an age ...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cloth' or simply 'cloths'?
Suggestion: a cloth; cloths
...applications from which we can purchase a cloths, shoes, electronic gadgets and many mor...
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Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...order grocery, mill, vegetables all the basic necessities for surviving. Besides, we too have opt...
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Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ions to cleaning our houses occasionally by paying money, additionally we possibl...
^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at at present we all have turned up with innumerable possibilities for plethora o...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: Somehow
...e possibilities for plethora of things. Some how, It is worth it that we do not have to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, even so, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6899682989 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635057471264 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4483451524 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234135941273 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850286593637 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410278646724 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147948225653 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360350074145 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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