From the past years, human has gained prosperities in different fields. Because of the competition of the investors in industry and economy in all over the world the diversity of products become huge and immense. I think this can be a reason for my agreement with the statement of the essay.
People now choose their clothes, homes, cars the way of traveling, sports and many other things according to their demands and incomes. speeding up industry and economy causes producing many products in human’s live. It was in the past time that people built a shelter to protect them from dangers, wore clothes to make them warm, put on shoes to have less pain by working in the farms. But now there are materials that let companies to make variety of products according to people demands. Therefore in my opinion regardless of nature disasters, that is a human that choose what he/she wants to buy, read, put on, eat, drink and etc. technological progress is one of the main reason that let people to have variety of choices in their life.
For example in the past people used telephone for communication purposes. But, now by emersion of variety of phones with different companies they choose a phone that have more options than others. Another example can be transportation system. In past transportation systems had low speed. There were trains that worked by coal or buses that had low power engines. Therefore people had to be patient until they received to destination. But now they have variety of choices to select the most fastest vehicle or even choose their own automobile for traveling.
We must consider nature disasters too. If there are a disruptive tsunami or earthquake, human has only have to find a way for escaping from the danger. In this case that is the nature that make decision.
To conclude, of curse we should consider natural disasters that let no choice for escaping from the terrible, but these were by people from the beginning of life. In another word we had past without technology and by natural unkindnesses but we live now in society full of technologies and we can say that we have many choices than the past times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Speeding
...according to their demands and incomes. speeding up industry and economy causes producin...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...cts in human's live. It was in the past time that people built a shelter to protect ...
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Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...f products according to people demands. Therefore in my opinion regardless of nature disa...
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Line 2, column 632, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... wants to buy, read, put on, eat, drink and etc. technological progress is one of the ma...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...al or buses that had low power engines. Therefore people had to be patient until they rec...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'fastest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: fastest
...y have variety of choices to select the most fastest vehicle or even choose their own automo...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the fastest'.
Suggestion: most the fastest
...y have variety of choices to select the most fastest vehicle or even choose their own automo...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'earthquakes'?
Suggestion: earthquakes
...o. If there are a disruptive tsunami or earthquake, human has only have to find a way for ...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...e tsunami or earthquake, human has only have to find a way for escaping from the dan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81401617251 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6088274715 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506738544474 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3166446295 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0476190476 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149576406662 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424502895396 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345264871982 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858957699055 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341872843602 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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