Some people believe that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss what is your opinion?
It is believed that submitting revenue payments are sufficient to add up to society by an individual. Whereas, others hold a notion that not just paying taxes is enough we should be more dutiful with the nation. In my opinion, I believe it is our responsibility to keep the environment fit and fine not just by paying taxes but also in supporting the society wherever possible. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my view.
Firstly, paying taxes will help the government to maintain economic balance and the paid taxes is spent on repair and development of the nation. Moreover, being a social animal it should be our top priority to take care of our environment by keeping it clean and green. For an illustration, maintaining the hygiene is pivotal for any society to live a healthy life. Use of dustbins, segregation of wastes and various other good practices can support the healthy life of human being. In addition to, maintaining the forest land and increasing the vegetation by plantation is quite useful for our planet earth.
Secondly, every individual is capable of something on this planet. Use of talent and our skills as a voluntary, we can improve our society in a number of ways. For an instance, the teacher can educate the society and spread knowledge and awareness in poor and rural areas. Furthermore, an artist can make art and represent his work to spread awareness on social issues. Such as the killing of girl child in a fetus is very common in India, awareness of such topics and educating people how girl child is equally important.
In conclusion, Society is an important part of us and just by paying taxes is not enough anyhow. we should take a stand and help our society as much as possible and consider that as our responsibility to keep our community healthy and safe for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to add up to society by an individual. Whereas, others hold a notion that not just pay...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t by paying taxes is not enough anyhow. we should take a stand and help our societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77711068379 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5601614654 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127197093919 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441626782116 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619500115879 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828000177841 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623345438496 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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