People have different views about whether studying online has a positive influence on students. While some people reckon that traditional learning brings back more merits than that method, I believe that the former opinion may appropriate for students in time when the global has to cope with Covid-19 pandemic.
Firstly, people strongly believe in physical learning because this learning form dates from old time. It can not be denied that offline learning gives to students fully balance quality to study. They are taught by the same teacher, in the same environment. Hence, opportunities they have are analogous. When going to school, they can keep track of lessons from teachers directly, so noting books is easier and whenever they feel uncomprehensive, they could ask for teacher’s answers. Besides, their teachers are capable of controlling them, while E-learning makes them be treated by mischievous students as they can play truant to play games. This is one of advantages which face to face learning has but online learning do not.
On the other hand, advocates of the idea of why distant learning should be done explicate that they have seen plenty of benefits from online learning. To begin with, this choice can reduce dramatically geographical boundries , it means that distance is not a problem for ones who live far away universities. For instance, more online courses seem to be quite efficient, despite being arranged by ones like american teachers, students from parts of the world all take part in them. As a result, that is beneficial for saving travel costs or fuel costs, both students and teachers just stay at home and carry out the courses. This method is given many approvals from parents, because thesedays, the world has struggled with the negative impact of Covid 19 pandemic, a contagious disease, making humans miserable, so going out is always dangerous to get the rate of get Covid to increase sharply. Staying at home and learning online help them shield themselves from diseases, moreover, both parents can save an amount of money for other issues.
In spite of these above arguments about the challenges of internet based- education such as inability to focus on screens or a sense of isolation, I still hold a strong belief that online studying is reasonable and economical because it has changed people’s mind about studying. Not only students are able to get access to the advanced technology but also do they master themselves, study themselves. The reason I am in favor of is that this choice help them protect their health, avoid communicating with ill people.
In conclusion, although many people would agree with physical learning, from my perspective, I still support ones who prefer to learning online because it is a digital method which is suitable in this technological era.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ronment. Hence, opportunities they have are analogous. When going to school, they c...
^^^
Line 2, column 721, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
...o face learning has but online learning do not. On the other hand, advocates of t...
^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...duce dramatically geographical boundries , it means that distance is not a problem...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learn'?
Suggestion: learn
...ive, I still support ones who prefer to learning online because it is a digital method w...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11663066955 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68511909579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585313174946 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0722665149 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.684210526 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149035509522 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461534663626 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559891137898 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101836109574 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884564161866 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ronment. Hence, opportunities they have are analogous. When going to school, they c...
^^^
Line 2, column 721, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
...o face learning has but online learning do not. On the other hand, advocates of t...
^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...duce dramatically geographical boundries , it means that distance is not a problem...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learn'?
Suggestion: learn
...ive, I still support ones who prefer to learning online because it is a digital method w...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11663066955 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68511909579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585313174946 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0722665149 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.684210526 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149035509522 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461534663626 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559891137898 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101836109574 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884564161866 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.