Those who makes this claim never did one day of hard labor and called it a day. Back breaking jobs at Amazon, and all warehouses right now is a testament of the claim. Go to College and earn a degree, or die young and have many many children.
First, finding a job straight after school is brilliant. Everyday after you finished your university class, you should go to a job market and find a new job, simple and easy. By keep looking jobs everyday, you will run out of options one day, hopefully. By that time your university life would be over and enjoy unemployment!
Second, studying at a secondary institution is the definitive way to survive in modern society. Except student loans, wasted college junkies and AIDS carrying roomates. When a college student’s life is filled with drugs, sex and social justice seeking activities, the accomplishment of one is lesser than the victory of all. Is it better for everyone to go get a job? No, it only gets better for someone, remember it was college students in North Korea, South Korea, Talancia, Bhutan and Hindustan overthrow the oppressive military governments.
Last, make love, not war and Vietnam was the lesson. If not thousands of college students died in the hands of militaristic police, we would still be in Vietnam. The children of those who went to Afghanistan are now in college age. If not student loans and AIDS destroyed their fighting spirits, the endless war would be won by now.
In conclusion, go get laid in college, or go to farmers’ only.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni 86
- Claitown University needs both affordable housing for its students and a way to fund the building of such housing. The best solution to this problem is to commission a famous architect known for experimental and futuristic buildings. It is common knowledg 58
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get job straight after school.Discuss both views. 61
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores."In order to stop the recent decline in our profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental store 63
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of a manufacturing company."During the past year, workers at our newly opened factory reported 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than workers at nearby Panoply Industries. Panoply produces products 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...nd earn a degree, or die young and have many many children. First, finding a job stra...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...job straight after school is brilliant. Everyday after you finished your university clas...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., simple and easy. By keep looking jobs everyday, you will run out of options one day, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73341060161 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5404408431 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161368254907 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537298890077 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512040469759 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744569539502 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469317757929 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.