Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is considered by many that the young children should involve themselves for the service of the society free of cost in their spare time. It will help in the development of both the students and the community. I completely agree that the selfless help of the community will be better for students as they can gain experience and grow as a better individual.Furthermore, it will help in the growth of the entire society as well.
There are many positive aspects of social service done by the youth. Firstly, the most important reason of service of neighborhood is that teenagers gain work experience and get prepared for the corporate life. They face the real time challenges which could later help them in future when they enter the adulthood. Secondly, it will enhance the interpersonal skills of the youngsters and will groom them as a better individual. For instance, children working in an old age home learn to handle and respect the senior citizens.
Additionally, society also gets benefitted by the services of the Millenials as they get people to work for them free of cost. Resources which would have been spent for the work done by the volunteers could be utilized in other productive areas. To illustrate, if the task of cleaning a community garden is assigned to the teenagers, then the workforce and funds reserved for this work could be used elsewhere for the betterment of country as a whole.
In conclusion, in my opinion, teenagers should should willingly work for the betterment of community as it will be advantageous for them, also, it will help that sector to grow due to allocation of saved funds in other areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10545454545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90143538145 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7468526665 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183092621781 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661379172969 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563055707879 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105274098573 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463190019443 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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