Some people believe that those moving abroad should try to adapt themselves to the new cultures. While some think that there is no need to do. So, Discuss and give your opinion.
Due to a globalization world become smaller day by day ad people are learning something in life from different cultures. There are some believers who think that those who are migrating need to adjust to a new culture.However, others believe that it is not necessary a tall. In my discourse ahead, I will discuss both the views and give my unbiased opinion before reaching to a reasonable conclusion.
It’s beneficial for those who are moving abroad and adapt new cultures on foreign land. First is that it gets easy to settle quickly. To accept new culture of a particular country can smooth the process of settle down. Secondly, by accepting to the foreign culture, it can be the way of gesture to express feelings towards them. Therefore, localize do not behave like intruders enter in their nation which make easy to accept them. For example, Indians are adjust themselves in cultures of any country. As we know in the USA, most foreigners living are Indians.
On the other hand, there are some personal reasons of people not to adapt. To begin with, after a certain age it is very difficult for an adult to give up their culture and accommodate new one. The barrier behind is that a person grew up in the other country and in other cultural beliefs. Hence, it can be difficult to let it go. In addition, to adapt a new culture of a particular nation is also a sensitive matter of religion. To accept that culture need to switch the religion in which they believe up till now. For example, Hindus are being forced to change their religion at many places by rigid religion followers around the globe.
To conclude, in line with the views presented above it is evident that both sides of the argument hold to their respective position and relevant. I, however, am of the view that it is a subjective matter which is depend on each and every individual. No one should impose on anyone to believe in something. As cultures are made to bring people close to each other and bring piece instead of conflict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68450704225 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58962574051 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543661971831 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8066330562 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1904761905 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217873840009 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552504844008 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666426855905 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120105886531 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626784004486 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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