Pursuing the technology flow , it seems that Internet nowadays has sneaked into every corner of the world . However , there are still some part of the community have low budget that could not pay for Internet. The discussion below will show both view.
On the first hand , some people believe that the government should provide free access to Internet for everyone .This is indeed a positive act. First, citizens have to spend a good amount of their income for tax. Those money should be responsible for service in cities, thus, Internet for free is one of the factors. Furthermore, despite the fact that almost every households have their propriate Internet access, expensive price was still a problem for others with lack of income. They are still looking for basic living standard such as shelter or food , let alone Internet access. Therefore, the government should take further steps, suggesting that citizens' life would be better in different aspects.
On the other hand , some people argue that Internet should be paid by our own. To begin with, it is true that everyone should work for goods that they need. As a result , government may not give away Internet for free. Moreover, in case some household do not have the need for Internet, goverment will spend a waste of money.
To sum up , i still strongly follow the idea of government should be responsible for free Internet access as the advantages it provides
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Pursuing the technology flow , it seems that Internet nowadays has sne...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s sneaked into every corner of the world . However , there are still some part of ...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...into every corner of the world . However , there are still some part of the commun...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... will show both view. On the first hand , some people believe that the government...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ide free access to Internet for everyone .This is indeed a positive act. First, ci...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...e free access to Internet for everyone .This is indeed a positive act. First, citize...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'Those moneys', 'Those monies'?
Suggestion: This money; Those moneys; Those monies
... a good amount of their income for tax. Those money should be responsible for service in ci...
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Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... living standard such as shelter or food , let alone Internet access. Therefore, t...
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Line 2, column 653, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...uld take further steps, suggesting that citizens life would be better in different aspec...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in different aspects. On the other hand , some people argue that Internet should ...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rk for goods that they need. As a result , government may not give away Internet f...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... will spend a waste of money. To sum up , i still strongly follow the idea of gov...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll spend a waste of money. To sum up , i still strongly follow the idea of gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92887029289 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44860629126 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4072459774 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513438389655 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17710991897 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124780499549 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30610921455 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113845575594 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Pursuing the technology flow , it seems that Internet nowadays has sne...
^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s sneaked into every corner of the world . However , there are still some part of ...
^^
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...into every corner of the world . However , there are still some part of the commun...
^^
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... will show both view. On the first hand , some people believe that the government...
^^
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ide free access to Internet for everyone .This is indeed a positive act. First, ci...
^^
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...e free access to Internet for everyone .This is indeed a positive act. First, citize...
^^^^
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'Those moneys', 'Those monies'?
Suggestion: This money; Those moneys; Those monies
... a good amount of their income for tax. Those money should be responsible for service in ci...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... living standard such as shelter or food , let alone Internet access. Therefore, t...
^^
Line 2, column 653, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...uld take further steps, suggesting that citizens life would be better in different aspec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in different aspects. On the other hand , some people argue that Internet should ...
^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rk for goods that they need. As a result , government may not give away Internet f...
^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... will spend a waste of money. To sum up , i still strongly follow the idea of gov...
^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll spend a waste of money. To sum up , i still strongly follow the idea of gover...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92887029289 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44860629126 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4072459774 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513438389655 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17710991897 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124780499549 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30610921455 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113845575594 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.