Some people believe that uniforms at workplaces aren’t necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Nowadays, academic and professional experts have different controversial topics regarding how firms should treat their workforce, and one of these cases is uniform in the workplace; while some think the use of uniforms is an unnecessary practice and should be stopped immediately due to its adverse effects, there are critics have an opposite point of view. As far as I am concerned, I think mandatory uniform in the workplace is not beneficial to companies, and I will discuss my logic in this essay.
First, the uniform is not beneficial in today's economy, since every job has different requirements and responsibilities. For instance, the sales department is in direct contact with major clients and significant players, which requires salespeople to dress accordingly, while the maintenance or manufacturing department of a firm, have different priorities and requirements, which makes a unique uniform for all workforces near impossible. Furthermore, this plan had adverse effect on employee morale, since people have different tastes and interest, based on the color, size, and material; by forcing people to wear a particular cloth every day, workforces might lose their interest in the firm, and even worse, leave to a place with fewer regulations.
Admittedly, uniforms could be a measure for implementing discipline, or signaling equality in the firm to employees; In this manner, higher-ranked people would wear the same clothes as juniors, leads to a more flat structure in the firms with more direct communication and higher productivity. However, this plan seems simplistic and could not fulfill comprehensively job force's need these days.
In conclusion, while there are indeed advantages in wearing uniforms, such as discipline and consistency in a firm, it is not practical anymore. This plan has become obsolete, due to the fact that job requirements and people's taste vary within the firms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44966442953 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16412348083 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8837596013 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.444444444 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816494876368 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326799499509 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195093641409 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468749293358 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172330264018 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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