Some people believe that using taxpayer funds to look for life on other planets is important. Others, however, think that it is a waste of public money because there are much more important issues requiring funding on our own planet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Without any doubt, Society is divided into two groups as per their distinct mindset of different people, therefore, it has become a debatable issue whether government should have spent money to find out the life in other planet or need to focus on the development of the people in their country, this essay will not only shed light both perceptions but also my point of view also elaborated in conclusion
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor, first of all, in light the announcement of United nations, it is inevitable to find the alternate location for living because of increasing rate of population as earth cannot accommodate the peoples in near future, besides, due to global warming, change in climate is in an alarming rate and none can never assume how long can be live in earth is possible. India and China are examples of over population.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, first point is that authorities cannot close the eyes against the well-being and development of people in their own country, tax payer’s money should use for the development of infrastructure, education and health of the individuals in their own country. Moreover, first preference is advisable for the benefits of the people live in this earth and a visionary government could have allocated the budgets wisely so they can mitigate the objection from public when they go for research and invention in new planet. India is a developing country and have lot of people struggling for their livelihood even though government invested massive amount of money for the availability of water in Moon.
In a conclusion, according to my perspective, definitely, equal consideration is necessary but tax revenue collected from public are for their hard earned money thus first preference is significant for their purpose.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81833704462 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.901336918 49.4020404114 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.833333333 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150998793584 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687351076374 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335363209033 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859090317649 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040874976124 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81833704462 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.901336918 49.4020404114 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.833333333 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150998793584 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687351076374 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335363209033 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859090317649 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040874976124 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.