Together human beings, wild life, vegetation etc formulates an environment to live in. Centuries ago people led nomadic life in forests surrounded by species of animals. But today the idea of people and wild animals living in the same context is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reason conclusion is drawn.
Firstly, the imbalance is the humans centred eco-system have generated as results of growing population and urbanization due to this fact today's generation lack the contact between wild life and themselves, which is sufficed by zoo in city. For example, children can see extinct wild animals and others such as white tigers, leopards, giraffes, etc in a zoo which is impossible to find in urban surroundings, people enjoy this enriching experience of visiting zoo. In addition, to this four new zoos been sanctioned to be built around the city within 2 years. Thus, it can be said why the idea of wild animals to kept in city is agreed by some people.
However, on the other side of this argument he negligence towards wild animals habitat is clearly witnessed. For instance, they can grow better in their own surroundings with fellow animals, being free rather than been locked in a cage, also as an responsible individual it lies in our duty to protect and work for enriching wildlife protecting the environment. Unfortunately, people these days are lacking in these values and becoming self-centered, they do not realize the pain caused in animals by separating them from their home. Hence, it can be stated that wild life should not be in the city but in jungles.
In summary, the healthy life-cycle and eco-cycle can be achieved by wild animals being raised in rurals. However after analyzing both in detail it is clear that the idea of keeping wild animals in city cannot be supported. As such, it is predicted that wild animals to be kept in jungle is superiorly agreed over opposite and plethora people will be on positive side of this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...her than been locked in a cage, also as an responsible individual it lies in our d...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...by wild animals being raised in rurals. However after analyzing both in detail it is cl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88728323699 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69096253433 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.221416449 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312883440765 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116867820904 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834501113461 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195904364105 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580826264905 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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