There is no denying the fact that cars have impacted our lives to a great extent. Some people argue that cars have more demerits as compared to their merits. This essay will discuss my agreement with this fact and examine both the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car.
To commence with the favour of notion there are abundant factors behind the standpoints of the car. First and foremost, the car it's more disadvantages than it is created of enormous pollution and disease, instead of bad impact on the environment. Owing to this face of difficulties by a human. Nowadays, majority of the masses purchase of own vehicle, due to increase rate of petroleum and diesel. In addition, it creates a hazardously horrible situation for the economy. This, individual should be in control of the user traffic bicycle.
Moving further, few reasons can be accounted for considered this positive development. These days, they dramatically gain more population in the scenario. So the majority of people have car benefit that when they visit outside at time they easily usage of it every time and on any place. Due to this, they are not waiting to provide a vehicle by authorities. For instance, sometimes they are need of own car in an emergency case. And they not with of the other vehicle. Resultingly, if people should buy to own car and it more advantage.
To conclude, I agree that even though cars have benefits like saving one’s precious time and providing comfort, we cannot ignore its drawbacks such as health issues and the high purchasing cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91287878788 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71002278309 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1204610436 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2941176471 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30203360749 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807698167109 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867433856353 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177344075309 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910814817537 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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