Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment).
Do you agree or disagree?
As the saying goes " Money cannot buy anything and everything" which is true in every aspect of life. Although, it is a known fact that while considering a purchase may it be a tangible or intangible cost is what matters to people the most, but not always. Certainly, there are many other criteria’s that help a person to arrive at a decision to buy or not to buy. I completely disagree to the statement stating money as the utmost thing for deciding a purchase. The following essay will discuss this in detail.
Yes, there have been instances where people must have thought about money first while reaching at a decision to buy some item or to decide on a service provider but very few. For example, this can majorly happen in situations where people are going for luxury items which are a matter of prestige, hence the price at which it is bought is of importance, moreover, it is a status symbol. Let’s take another example, say brand loyalty, if an individual is consistent towards a certain brand for years then whatever may be the price it does not hamper his/her buying decision reason being trust towards the quality. After all these are just handful number of buyers. Whereas, there a humongous amount of people who belong to the other side of the story.
Can money buy you happiness or memories? the answer to this will always remain no. In spite of money being one of the factors there are other criteria’s which are also taken into account along with money. For example; if a person has someone close hospitalized and needs to have a medicine that’s expensive he/she cannot keep money as a decider because here life is what matters more rather than money. Some people may borrow money from the bank or take some other assistance and would go on a tour with family or a solo trip to a remote place because here moments that are captured while on the trip, the enjoyment, thrill etc. is counted before taking the cost of the trip into consideration.
To conclude, as stated above I completely disagree that money can only be the of deciding factor to go or not to go for purchase. The other factors have more weightage that money because if we keep considering money before buying things or taking a service that we cannot enjoy the right moments in the right age or time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, after all, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69193154034 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55850885548 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515892420538 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1058153022 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.611111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129810447687 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420418228882 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378824620239 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870613186279 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257553955866 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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