In many countries, academic education is closely tied to students' financial condition. Accordingly, it is argued that universities should provide a special arrangement for those who can not afford their tuition and I agree with this statement.
Above all, there are many students in the world with high potential in science and technology who have to stop studying because they are poor. For example, many parents unwillingly decided to dose not allow their children to go to college because they cannot pay educational tuition fees and other expenses like books, materials which some subjects required or for college campuses. So that this child may not be able to get a good job in the feature.
Apart from tuition, all big and well-known university is located in big cities. Students from rural areas in the country, for instance, have to apply for university in order cities which means they spend a long time traveling between their home and college. So that it could be another reason for the university officials to help those pupils to stay at college dormitory for free.
Last but not least, equal educational opportunity is necessary for all students. Obviously, academic organizations can provide the best way that all interest and talented young people could be studying in the academic filed. As an illustration, universities could give them a full scholarship to cover the costs. In addition, students from rural areas provide a transportation system or low fee accommodation for their study period.
In conclusion, I believe that governments should help universities to make study easier for all needy people, also it could leading factors to improve the educational system in society.
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- there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your managerin your letter:describe the complaints that hav 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jects required or for college campuses. So that this child may not be able to get a goo...
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Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ier for all needy people, also it could leading factors to improve the educational syst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, may, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22909090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84315271404 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8334932108 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195607861974 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067237225079 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369508291689 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106548363666 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346542886433 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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