There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society prefers to shop for local products while others emphasize that imported products are better than local ones. However, in my opinion, customers should check the parameters before shopping any product whether it is a local product or international one. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail and conclude my opinion.
On the one side, numerous factors make a section of people advocate that local products are the good ones to buy in the market, and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is that consumers preferring to buy local goods which results incline the economy of the country. Apart from that, nominal costs like logistics, general tax, and sales tax are applied to local products because it does not include the taxes like custom clearance tax, certificates tax, and many more that come under international trading schemes. Moreover, there are more employment opportunities in the fields of marketing, advertising, manufacturing, and production because more development of local goods requires a large number of people to support the market of the local products.
On the other side, some believe that imported products are better than local ones because of several reasons. Chiefly, the assured quality of the product is granted by the manufacturer of the company. Due to assured quality, it has a good reputation in the market. Therefore, customers prefer to shop for international goods because it also influences buyers due to their trust-relationship which is built for so long. For instance, in India, consumers like to buy sports shoes from companies like Nike and Addidas instead of buying it from local brands like Bata because of their good reputation and quality.
In conclusion, in my view, customers should shop for both of the products in accordance with planned shopping budget, reviews of the other consumers how already bought the product. This will help them to get a valuable product according to their needs and its importance.
- YOU RECENTLY DID A SHORT COOKERY COURSE THE COOKERY SCHOOL HAS ASKED FOR YOUR FEEDBACK ON THIS COURSE Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you ve done si 84
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- Technology has changed human relationships do you think it s positive or negative 61
- Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ore development of local goods requires a large number of people to support the market of the loc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21921921922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82659322664 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2144672351 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386556784182 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132178180881 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796170580213 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242261895707 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10322611796 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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