Dear Mr. Bhasin,
I am writing to express my concerns related to the non-availability of car parking near our office premises and hope you will find this letter to the best of your knowledge.
Recently, the public parking space which was available for our staff has been shut down by the state government because they want to construct a hospital on the public parking space land. With this result, I have to park my car into the nearest mall marking which consumes money in my daily schedule. Apart from this, I have to walk for at least 15 minutes which is causing trouble to my attendance working hours since I'm arriving late to the office because it is consuming time to park my car inside the mall parking.
Therefore, I urge you to please rent an underground space for parking in our building which is available for rent. You can connect with our landlord to sign a new lease rental agreement and before that, you can present this suggestion in the HR meeting which will on next Friday. Since we have a underground space available for 2000 square meters, it will hold the ample amount of space available for the staff members to park their cars.
If the above vacate space available in our building will reform to car parking for our company workers, there will two benefits with this outcome. Firstly, convenience and comfort will be provided to all staff members. Secondly, every employee will able to come on time without wasting time to find vacant space outside our office building in the nearby locality.
I am hoping to hear a positive response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hich will on next Friday. Since we have a underground space available for 2000 sq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, therefore, apart from, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78928571429 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45819900475 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3093514041 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218291088039 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876388247666 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045204623956 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125198666072 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489190583277 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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