Some people prefer to live in hot climates whether others love the lifestyle of countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain.
People have different opinions in terms of living conditions. Some of them enjoy staying in colder environments, while others consider hot climate conditions much preferable. I will discuss both the sides in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the predominant reason for living in hotter climates is the convenience provided by the region. In other words, the majority of young individuals are, nowadays, involved in adventurous activities. For example, mountain climbing, trekking, and other tours and trips, which is not possible in the rainy and colder climates. So, people are moving to places which support their area of interest. Moreover, if talking about the older generation then their main reason is to stay in the places which support their health. As in the colder places the old people are more likely to suffer from health complications such as joint pain and respect tree problems.
However, there are other groups who are of opinion that they enjoy spending their time in colder regions, as it gives them plenty of options to live in their life. In other words, by living in these climate areas they can wear a wide range of stylish clothing, such as long jackets, high boots and trendy hats. Moreover, they can enjoy places covered with snow and spend their time more comfortably. For instance, many ways to travel to Switzerland only to enjoy the weather conditions.
In conclusion, there are obvious merits and demerits of living in both environmental conditions. So it completely depends upon the individual which climate condition suits them the most and they choose according to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...ion suits them the most and they choose according to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17735849057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772382049 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5761361201 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202964468217 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676326576238 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516328731262 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136108843416 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620784291477 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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