Nowadays, living in cities is more common, and people prefer to get together for having new opportunities. Decision making about type of the building is a challenging issue. Some people like to live in an apartment while others tend to be in a house. It is disagreed that staying in a house has more profitable in comparison with a flat. In this essay this issue would be discussed and concluded.
Todays, especially in developing countries, land is a precious asset, and in order to buy a house you should pay a lot of money while you are able to have a flat and save money. As an example, in Tehran, capital of the Islamic Republic of Iran, in some region of this mega city, the price of a square meter of land is more than 15,000 dollars. Only very few people could pay this money for housing but if this price distributes to some flats rather than a house, the price would be reasonable for more citizens. Thus, living in a flat could help to save money.
Secondly, security is a prominent aspect of abode. Unfortunately, in recent years, for the reason of some illegal treat like robbery, violence and etc. living in a flat is preferred. For instance, last month, we experienced robbery in our neighborhood. Robbers stole a lot of money from a house, when the settlers were not in their home. As it clear, living together and in a construction could be fruitful for prevention from this type of problems.
Living in a house has some preference in compare with others types of accommodations, but, as it mentioned above, staying in an apartment is affordable and bring a lot of security. For future, it is estimated that dwellers will be inclined to resident in flats more than past years.
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- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nationality by providing such things as food and education? Or it is responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 11
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development 73
- You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...me illegal treat like robbery, violence and etc. living in a flat is preferred. For inst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62582781457 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72255715132 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1291252223 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351582675964 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11639024834 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122866862925 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245252596118 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10093198139 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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