One of the most confusing questions hits everyone’s mind when thinking of buying or renting a home is “Apartment or Independent Home”. Through, many say, a dependent home benefits people privacy and freedom, there are further factors that should be taken in to account for a decision.
In most cases, live in a house means an offer of much more spaces than live in an apartment. Buying or renting a house usually comes with a yard/patio, which is great for accommodating pets and organising parties. That said, the yard/patio means plenty of work, such as mowing the lawn regularly. Also, when people live in a house, there tends to be less noise to deal with, which is excellent those individuals prefer a quiet environment for reading and watching TV.
Over spring and summer, there is another prominent advantage of house people could make a landscape design in the garden by their own preference while others live in the apartment cannot overwrite the community’s agreement of garden design.
The safety issue is always the primary concern of people for living in a house. The apartment commonly provides high barrier wall, complete security system and the security guard who could prevent outsiders unless permitted ones while the house normally locates at suburb areas without a barrier wall. Moreover, individuals choose to live in a house means a loss of facilities as the most apartments built with diversified facilities to cater for community life. Another vital factor that should be considered is the price, live in a house normally cost people double than live in an apartment.
Essentially, the difference between live in a house and live in an apartment boils down to three things: space, safety and cost. People should choose the suitable one that matches with their habits and preference. Personally, I am in favour of an apartment which could provide me more conveniences.
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. 56
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 11
- Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 90
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. 11
- Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are interested in. To what extent to you agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have taken' or 'take'?
Suggestion: have taken; take
...than house. Another vital factor should taken into account is price, buying a house o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61972008683 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7589916425 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334284542785 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12566623692 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113431932252 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209660227085 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105016059715 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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