Most of new generation are living in urban cities for better job opportunity and life style and they prefer to live in apartment as compare to house. For many people, especially new immigrants, apartment is convenient option to settle down. However, there are both pros and cons for staying our there. In this essay, I will discuss some of the pros and cons staying in apartment and house as well.
Let's begin by looking at the advantage of renting an apartment. One of the main positive staying in apartment is that you get a pretty social circle. What i mean by that is when we live in apartment we get chance to stay with diverse people. You get know to the culture, food, languages and festivals celebrated by them. Specially, growing kids and toddler get company to play and enjoy their free time. On the other hand, in house, it is hard to find neighbour to socialise yourself and kids, you feel alone and kids spend most of their time watching TV and using mobiles.
Secondly, Apartment has better facilities such as security, other amenities like playgrounds, community halls, gym, garden.
In urban areas where security is one of major concern, apartment provides security guard, CCTV cameras and restriction for entry for outsiders. These all can be avail on minimal prices and easily accessible. Whereas while staying at house it is hard to get all these benefits. One has to spend lot of money and time to arrange all.
Turning to other side of argument, apartment is not considered as a good investment option. Compare to house, apartment always has less re sale value and demand since buyer always has better option in terms of architecture and design. On other hand, Individual houses can be easily sold and give good return over the period of time.
Another issue is that apartment has less scope of modification and extension. In other words, If in future we require one or more rooms for family, it is impossible to build. Same time, if you want extra room in house we can either build room in exiting floor or extend the floor.
All things considered, living in apartment and house has their own benefit and negatives. You need to weigh up the pros and cons of living in apartment and houses. Personally i believe living in apartment is has more benefits than house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, as to, i mean, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77944862155 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49381619744 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.829608706 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4583333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300002962521 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077071919333 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813517862448 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12903512077 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905366348276 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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