Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to lving in apartments.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of lving in a house compared with living in apartment.
Today, people have different beliefs and standards in connection with their living place. although some people prefer living in houses, others have a tendency to live in apartments. There are advantages and disadvantages on both sides, which I will discuss now.
When it comes to apartments, a flock of people holds that living in apartments is beneficial mentally and financially. this group concerns about safety more, so they prefer this kind of accommodations because these buildings, most of the time, have a security guard at the entrance, who always looks after the place, and it makes a profound contribution to diminishing their stress about robberies. Another prized aspect of living in apartments is related to economic issues, including lower maintenance costs, cheaper utensil bills and so forth. For instance, because of the next-door neighbors and the same walls, the amount of energy transfers through walls and floors becomes less in comparison with houses. On the contrary, living in apartments have some downsides. For example, sounds and noise can pass through walls easily, and this can be irritating for some inhabitants.
On the other, a cohort of people believes that it is a well worth effort because of several advantages. Firstly, houses usually have gardens giving people who love flowers the opportunity to build their backyard and grow some vegetables and flowers. this leads to positive effects on their mental health. Furthermore, with regard to separate entering gates and free spaces between houses, their owners have more privacy and freedom. In contrast, people who have the desire to live in such houses should consider its drawbacks such as high cost for energy, lights, cameras, pesticides, and the risk of becoming a victim for robbers. Based on these disadvantages of living in houses, may not be affordable for some people.
Overall, although both houses and apartments have their pros and cons, from my point of view, living in houses is more convenient and well worth the efforts, provided that people can shoulder all the relevant costs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, on the contrary, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2994011976 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67876244263 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9247401352 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257918361267 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910555955117 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687783408013 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180259436492 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723471117333 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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