Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in
apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
It has been observed from the since, human beings are social animals as shelter is obligatory thing to survive easily. In this day and age, vast variety of houses are available for them. Some proponent claim that there are Immense benefits of house than live in apartment and I fremly advocate this view. In the present time we all know that houses with epic facilities like specious as well as it offer ownerships to human.
There are ample reasons which confirm that apartment has some ill- effect for living. Among these reasons I will concentrate here on the ones which is most overwhelmed is in apartment equipped quantum area for survive. For an example, people who live in apartment they can not reconstruct as they desire catalyses apartment has fixed pattern of plan. In addition, divers community live in building as consequence people can not feel privacy.
On the other hand, there are many wonderful fact of live in houses. First and for most indispensable fact is, houses offer more space as one can feel privacy. In houses people also gain huge garden area on which they can grow variety of plants or flowers which provide fregrence. For an instance, people can do reconstruction as they wish after some span and give new look to their house. Furthermore, houses mostly affordable by wealthy segment of people as the society is high culturaled and well behave.
To conclude, this there are some limitation of apartment such as scarcity of space and all kind of community which does not provide security. Similarly, houses are more durable and people can renovate as they like. My complete solidarity towards the fact that house provide more prons then apartment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, similarly, so, then, well, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50916540498 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5119650391 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329436180004 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106649173351 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722197264704 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196518724531 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020963833004 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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