Many people believe that playing sports on a team has many advantages rather than playing independently while other people think that playing sports individually like golf, swimming etc is more beneficial. This essay will analyze both points of view in turn.
Sports plays the most important role in our life. On the one hand, the benefits of playing sports in a group are many as team members in a group understand and coordinate properly with each other while playing against opposite team. For example, eight or nine players in a football team protect their football from competitors, passes the ball to their team member to hit the goal. The efforts of the team members always allow them to win the game and celebrate in a group. Additionally, in a particular team always a instructor guide their team members to play the game according to the rules and instructions which were given by the captain. For instance, captain of the cricket team instructs the players how to play the game so that they can win the game and would not allow the opposite team to make more runs.Team players are fully dependent on the captain of the team.
On the other hand, playing individually also have many advantages as a person plays the game freely and independently, no one interrupts a person in the game. An individual player uses own formulas and tricks to win the game. There are so many players in our nation who play individual sports like swimming, golf, table tennis, badminton, weightlifting play national and international level and won many medals for our country. One most famous example of a recent player, Geeta phogat is famous female wrestler won many trophies and medal for our country from last few decades. All the credit goes to her because individually without others instruction she uses her own techniques and tricks beat her competitor. The single player deserves the prize in individual sports.
In conclusion, my opinion on this views is that playing sports in most essential either playing in a team or individually. Both sports having their own advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67400029002 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2847086229 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237368066137 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841310432957 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069401592243 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155269838199 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402513762534 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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