In this fashionable world, people have a tendency to copy latest trends in clothing, cosmetics, electronics, gadgets and more. It is an undeniable thought and I agree with this proposition.
Firstly, with the help of our celebrities, people try to imitate the latest fashion from them. For example, mostly male celebrities started a new trend to build muscular bodies and young generation adapt to have muscular bodies. Additionally, people copy everything from the film industry as well as from fashion industry. Not only this, younger girls also follow heroines, their diet plans, items of clothing, styles, and much more.
Secondly, youngsters are so much aware of latest fashion, they surf the internet, magazines. Furthermore, few people and youngster always imitate from their own friends and people living in their neighborhood. People copy the similar lifestyles of others. They feel jealous which causes problems in future. For instance, someone bought the latest model car with all automatic facilities, it is the human tendency, neighbors always feel jealous.
Lastly, fashion continuously changes and update every year, people always follow the latest designs on clothing. Latest automatic functions in vehicles and upgraded functions in electronics devices. Human beings liking also rising with the development in the fashion industry, electronics and more. This tendency is not limited nor restricted in small area, it is in all over worldwide. However, some people have a different personality, prefer to create their own style instead of copying others so that others start copying their style of fashion. For instance, a fashion designer never copies the items of clothing, they use their imagination and create a unique design.
In conclusion, I believe that most people in this world have a great tendency for copying others in all aspects and it is not possible to ignore this tendency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'copy the latest'.
Suggestion: copy the latest
...onable world, people have a tendency to copy latest trends in clothing, cosmetics, electron...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... Secondly, youngsters are so much aware of latest fashion, they surf the internet, magazi...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...They feel jealous which causes problems in future. For instance, someone bought the lates...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
... follow the latest designs on clothing. Latest automatic functions in vehicles and upg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4381270903 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73419093097 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1451664857 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154792706799 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513394989986 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398975927092 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974545934311 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370873265519 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.