People prefer to spend their leisure time engaging different activities. Some people love physical activities while the others opt for more mind oriented activities. In my opinion, right blend of both activities uplifts one’s health and stamina more sustainably.
Undoubtedly, engaging in physical activities like sports and games provides a bunch of benefits. It maintains body fitness and protects people from various deceases like heart stokes and diabetics by burning extra calories. Activities like running and swimming refresh whole body inside, stimulating blood and air circulation. Moreover, there are lots of games that are performed in groups which help people to interact, enjoy and have fun while in playing. Activities like cycling and hiking take people to new places, opening up new experiences and adventures that create long lasting memories as well. Therefore, physical activities energize health and wellness via interaction with the others and environment.
At the same time, mindful activities like chess and crosswords bring mental healthiness and happiness. Such activities awake the brain and nerve system and improve logical and analytical capabilities. Notably, activities like crosswords and puzzles bring new knowledge as well as self satisfaction. However, they lack physical movements thereby confining someone to still positions for a longtime. Nevertheless, many studies have found that mental activities supports to improve nerve system, especially when people age over time.
To conclude, engaging in activities in free time brings both long term and short term benefits. Choosing the right blend of physical and mental activities based on own capabilities and preference enables to obtain the maximum benefit out of both without compromising each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77819548872 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81574931961 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6861313504 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355527952814 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112208254035 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644513858102 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21842617034 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037914345647 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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