Technology has disrupted the retail industry in many ways. While many are adapting to the new trend of electronic shopping, there are still many people who remain to prefer the old-fashioned way of buying at the supermarket. This essay will discuss the benefits of online food ordering and why the traditional shopping is more superior.
It cannot be denied that the internet shopping is becoming the convenient way of doing the time-consuming task of running to a store. With the invention of mobile phone applications, one can just simply add items in an electronic cart, pay with a credit or debit card, and receive the items through door-to-door same day delivery. As an example, Honest Bee, a web-based business, has a value proposition of promising its customers a quick and hassle-free grocery service at a very minimal fee. Because of this modern technology, more people with hectic schedules choose to go online because it can save time, energy and money by just clicking away few buttons anytime and anywhere.
However, the traditional supermarket offers a better customer experience and surprisingly is still preferred by majority. In fact, grocery goers find it more enjoyable to walk through the aisles of a store and engage in face-to-face interaction with a grocery staff. In addition, the opportunity to physically see, touch and smell food items such as produce and vegetables not only ensures customers that they get the freshest and best quality products. Thus, grocery shoppers find the human and sensory experience of physically visiting a store to be more engaging and extremely pleasurable activity.
Modern day shopping is becoming popular and considered by some as the new normal. This essay presented the advantages of internet shopping and why traditional supermarket is a better experience. In my opinion, even though online web based shopping offers a seamless process, it can never replace the personalized experience through human connection visiting a supermarket ultimately offers a far superior because of personalized experience and human connection that only a real supermarket can offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33234421365 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99372558972 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6537872448 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167323478989 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562098304073 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550002214337 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100649705684 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619611675936 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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