Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. Discuss
It is common knowledge that work plays key roles in society. The question, however, arises is it better to stick to one job in the same company or to change it from time to time. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide relevant examples.
First and foremost, it is often claimed that many people easy accustom to their job and do not like to change their practice. Most of the people are afraid of new experience they prefer safe, peaceful and stable life rather than getting something new. For instance, keeping one job give people felling of comfortable and nothing to worry about. Another benefit of staying in one job is that we are gaining more experience and expertise in our specific profession. Which may lead us to get a promotion when the employer will see our loyalty and devotion.
On the other hand, however, it is often claimed that changing a company gives as a chance to discuss better salary and work agreements. Moreover, new employment often means a new experience in totally different environment, which has an enormous value on the market place. Besides, it is well known fact that employers are keen to promote people which have experience from more that one working place.
From the arguments I have presented above it can be seen that both arguments definitely have their supporters and opponents. In my opinion in today’s world we have so many opportunities that would be such a waste of life to spend it in one job. We should encourage our self to be more active not only in the working environment but also in our whole life in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...e. Most of the people are afraid of new experience they prefer safe, peaceful and stable l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74910394265 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56185412712 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9080872217 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19691669566 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601320816953 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576822146487 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107179905623 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675446922435 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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