some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle.
Which of these do you prefer.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by a car and a bicycle.
Modern era has seen several changes in the way we commute. These changes have made our lives simpler but comes with a cost involved. Some people opine that commuting by a car is essential, while others are of the opinion that bicycle is the best way to commute. I prefer to travel by a car and the following essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of both.
The greatest benefit of travelling in a car is its comfort. Its allows a person to escape from sun and rain. Cars have features like windows, chairs, heaters and radio which adds comfort to a person. These features are adjustable and hence a person feels more relaxed while driving. However, automobiles are expensive and cannot be owned by everyone. Several people take loans to buy an automobile. The interest paid at the end of the loan tenure is almost double the amount of the car cost. Hence, travelling by a car has its own advantages and disadvantages.
On the other hand, bicycles are cheap and convenient to use. These can be afforded by anyone and are mostly seen in universities and schools. Parking has become a major concern for most working professionals and are unable to reach their offices on time. Bicycles are easy to commute and can be parked anywhere as it does not take much space. There are however some drawbacks of riding a bicycle such as, a person cannot go fast on a bicycle as it drains the physical energy in the body. A person has to endure heat, dust or rain while riding a bicycle and hence has to carry a jacket or a raincoat. Thus, riding a bicycle has certain disadvantages though it is affordable.
In conclusion, though we have several options to commute, it is upto the person to decide the best means of transport. I feel that travelling in a car is better, as it is safe and allows a person to relax while commuting from one place to another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, so, thus, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59459459459 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61109341077 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3991244046 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8571428571 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252498864839 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724092396359 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890304426364 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150360743882 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855843580182 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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