Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed or own a business, or work for someone else?
Recently, people dream of working for themselves and some of them tend to take a plunge. Besides, there are people who would rather to be employees. Personally, I think that each of opinions has its own advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, some have decided to be self - employed in order to not to be regulated by any procedures or to be gorverned by company's regulations. They would have completely freedom and control over their business as they want. In addition, owning a business means they could follow their passion, find motivation from interest as well as do something they desire every day.
However, working for themselves required to work harder and to spend long hours at work. To focus on running a business to success would take them too much time and efforts to love themselves as well as to balance between personal life and work. Moreover, the employers could have to face up with many risks of bad debt, bankruptcy and carry a can of their employees who are relying on them for living.
On the other hand, people who choose to work for a boss have many benefits such as having steady income through their monthly wages despite the company might be perform poorly. More than that, the employees are almost unresponsible for struggling competitors and unexpected losses. They also have various benfits from occupational community, healthcares, annual leave, retirement funds, maternity and other medical allowances. In spite of those pros, there are some cons of having limited hour working, or complying with regulations.
To sum up, after comparing between benefits and drawbacks, I totally prefer to be an employee since it has lower risk
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02158273381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7045094941 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7469716784 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382833582105 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114676850846 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803448097039 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189561165251 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852636866881 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.