Some people prefer young leaders, while others thinks senior managers have the experience. What do you think?
<p class="MsoNormal">Leadership is playing an important rule when it comes to
successful business management. It is argued whether young leaders or senior
managers can be more effective in working life. I am of the belief that future
generations should take their opportunity in the leadership community. This
essay will manifest the reasons why I prefer young leaders. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Firstly, in the modern era, young leaders are more informed
and influenced when it comes to the technology revolution. Not only does youth
have the scientific knowledge of the latest inventions but also they can use
them to develop their management. On other words, youth leadership has become a
global leap; they can implement modern strategies rather than elder managers. A
prime example, the spread of youth leadership training programs which ensure
the importance of youth voice. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Secondly, future generations have the soul of improvement
and development. As an illustration, they possess the spirit of positive action
to prove themselves which helps in developing their surroundings. Moreover,
they have the aim of success to leave a mark in their career for the following
generations which helps in raising the challenging spirit between youth; this
can reduce unemployment. For instance, the successful French president,
Emmanuel Macron, was publicly selected by the end of his thirties after his
honourable political career history.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> In conclusion, I
would like to restate my opinion that youngsters deserve the chance to prove
that they are able to lead our community organizations. It is highly
recommended that governments should raise the awareness of their rights in
leadership positions which gives them the intense interest to a broaden their
horizons to have faith and give their best. <o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28014184397 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.97247086727 2.80592935109 177% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9067965144 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.583333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719486257646 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343619067518 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042879682111 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199164710661 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344822898915 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.44 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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